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Chapter 93: Capitalism With Avarian Characteristics

🕑 Added 2025-05-02 06:50:58 +0000 UTC

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Kermit The Frog

Agreed. Personally I came here for a isekai focusing on business dealings and development in the confines of a medevial system. What we have now is a character focused drama about Senior and his chimera galavanting around and doing little to nothing. The author just tells us that things happen, we don't get to actually experience anything but the aftermath. Hard to care about the main character when he clearly doesn't give a shit. I'm bored and I'm out of this fiction.

SlaveToMyWhims

Am I crazy or does the flow of the story seem jagged as if it was broken and assembled back from ill-fitting chunks? Can't help feeling like it's a series of scenes with mini-time-skips instead of a whole smooth story. May have something to do with the author skimming over the process of things and just delivering us results. EG: 'hocus-pocus... and so MC took over the economy of the whole dutchy by doing this-this-and-this'. Could have worded that critique better, but i hope the meaning comes through. Also, the reason i didn't suggest a specific improvement is because i didn't quite nail down what specifically needs change to improve the general feel. I suspect it's more than one thing. Sorry about that.

Dylan Alexander

I’m glad that there are consequences to Willem’s desertion, then again, I don’t think he cares much about the people he effects, even Willem junior doesn’t care a lot. If the king targeted his money however…


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