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Magical Rubber Maiden Julia #4

🕑 Added 2018-05-05 01:13:29 +0000 UTC

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Fiona

You will know VERY soon ;)

Azure

Oooo so is Aesthiria hero or villain, cause I am leaning towards villain and I am REALLY hoping she wins.

mykalwane spirt of gender shrug they greater than she, she greater than he.

Well done

Fiona

Glad you're enjoying it! I always like hearing your speculations :) The wording was intentional, and I actually removed the 'to' from it, because it sounded more like how I imagined she'd speak. More direct, more kind of ye oldey.

DarkJade

Oh wow, I wasn't expecting Julia to end up looking like she does here, but it is a good look for a henchwoman working for Empress Aesthiria that's a major step up from the standard faceless doll minions which could be employed as foot soldiers (and it's also nice to finally know our mystery woman's name)! And it does seem like Julia is totally under Aesthiria's control here (at least for the moment), but I am very curious to see how exactly things will develop from here... There's one slight tweak needed though, that alright? In panel five, to make it flow a little better than it currently does, maybe try saying this: "I had intended you TO merely BE the first of my new empire of dolls. But no... This sheer power cannot be wasted. Instead, you shall serve me in a far greater capacity", since the current phrasing there is a little bit odd looking to me personally.