Collar6 Remastered #04

Fiona

Currently, I'm not planning to re-release them. They were filled with elements (including bad scripting and terrible art) that I just don't want in there anymore. I realize I risk alienating y'all, but I really do believe my 'second draft' or 'remaster' or whatever will improve most aspects of the original. You have to consider that Sixx's insecurity later was pretty much myself speaking through her, realizing, even back then, how much I'd botched my intentions coming out the gate. So while you may see a heartfelt moment of sincerity, I see my failings as a writer and creator. I am terribly sorry. :(

Wild Card

Very good change. Laura overdid things, and Sixx and Ginger realize this and stop while Laura is in a state where she can't continue to give consent. I really like that, it shows respect for Laura and each other.

Rewritting this part of the story is generally a good thing, but well Sixx messing up, admitting to haved messed up and trying to make up for it was what gave her character the first layer of depth. It showed that she had flaws and issues of her own, despite being an other wise highly competent individual. I mean the spiked coffee was bad and needed to go, but in the original run her messing up was what started these characters to start talking and growing. I know that the coffee, was just the beginning and that not realising Gingers feelings and how weirded out Laura was were the real problem. Which probably will still factor in this time. Maybe with a bigger focus on the mountain of Sixxes emotional baggage and abandonment issues which caused here to do these miscalculations in the first place. If everything in this arc just goes smoothly, the characters will miss a chance to grow and develop. The paradox thing about the original is that it made, Sixx look like a jerk but also made her more relatable and likeable in the long run.

DarkJade

Well now, that's certainly a lot different then what'd happened originally, with poor Laura freaking out about what was going on with her body; all due to her not knowing why she was feeling the way she was (and Michelle not explaining just what was going on, due to her rushing into things, in her desperate bid to try and rescue Trina from Evita's grasp and assuming that Laura had some idea of the most basic items [with Ginger also having fallen into that trap, assuming Michelle had covered certain things with Laura]; a weakness Michelle has now managed to get a better handle on in more recent comics, but she'll still need to be a little careful about taking the proper time to think over the information she is given carefully, especially when she gets too emotionally worked up)... Just how out of it is Laura right now though? She's reminding me of a cat that's after having a little too much catnip and is feeling really good, but that state of mind doesn't seem to be very helpful for Michelle's purposes right now; given how Laura might not be totally aware of everything that's going on around her at the moment and Michelle much prefers that her slaves are able to give their consent to whatever kinky activities she has planned, before they get started (at least that is the case, when Michelle's able to keep a cool head and all her wits about her). I'm certainly very curious to see what happens next though, while Laura's still a little out of it (if we don't skip ahead in time to the trio's next attempt, where this go around, Laura doesn't knock back the drink so quickly): will we have a scene where Michelle and Ginger now have a private chat between them both, cut over to seeing just what is going on at this point in time with Evita and her captive, or some other story element which will set things up for future events!

Skye Benz

Question for you; Are the original strips still going to be available somewhere? The original coffee scene was a shitshow, but I had the most powerful emotional reaction I’ve ever had to a creative work when I read the original make-up scenes where the girls address Ginger’s jealousy, and much later when they address Sixx’s insecurity prior to the coffee incident.