Collar6 patreon

I Don't Want To Be a Succubi's Rubberdoll! #01

🕑 Added 2020-03-13 06:07:08 +0000 UTC

Comments

LlamaMaster

“National Treas-“ here, have a like.

Lattimer Pines

From the first National Treasure movie: Ben Gates: You know, Thomas Edison tried and failed nearly 2,000 times to develop the carbonized cotton-thread filament for the incandescent light bulb. Riley Poole: Edison? Ben: And when asked about it, he said "I didn't fail; I found out 2,000 ways how not to make a light bulb," but he only needed one way to make it work.

DarkJade

Both of those treadmills look just fine to me personally, it's clear what they are meant to be. There's no need at all to beat yourself up over, since we all think that you've done a wonderful job here! Although, I am certainly curious to see more and which one of these two challengers are going to end up losing and being turned into our host's plaything for (maybe there will be a poll for us to choose who actually ends up surviving this challenge)... Wonder what exactly her backstory is (I'm referring to the host here) though and if we might get to learn some more about her, during the periods which take place between each of her challenges? And certainly going to be very interesting to see how exactly the wishes that some of our winners make might play out, even if we might only see a part of them (either the beginning or the end result). But no pressure there! I can even see some winners potentially using their newly acquired wish (all depending on what their reason for taking part in their challenge was) in such a way that our host might not have expected, like: "I wish to stay with you forever"... Then again, who knows what may happen next in this comic (apart from the creator themselves)?

Lomond

At first when you said “I can’t draw treadmills.”, I thought you meant drawing it as a physical item as opposed to speed/ movement effects.

Great Scott

Three in a row on time (as adjusted -- you gave advance warning so it's still on time). You're doing great, you should be proud of your self. Nothing wrong with those treadmills -- they're just "moving sidewalks" of the kind you find in airports. Don't let the "perfect" be the enemy of the "good enough" -- this is fine.

Stefan J Neylon

I wonder what happens if they fall at the same time.

Brett Mount

Blue costume has totally got this.

Amyphist

I think it came out OK. But if there’s something like this you don’t feel confident about drawing, you could always write a piece of short fiction instead.

Vixandra

Honestly, if you haven’t said anything, I wouldn’t have even glanced twice at the treadmill as the competitors are the main focus. Looking forward to the next page..

LlamaMaster

Honestly, I really like this. The concept is cool, and while I agree with Jack that doing movement in art is just hard in general, I think you did the best you could. Looking forward to the rest of this arc!