Shrine Maiden (page 2)
🕑 Added 2022-10-17 16:27:51 +0000 UTCif there any mistakes i would be very great full for the miss speeling followed by the correction <3
ok so, first page done, we've set the stage... Now, this is where the fun begins. I nice and slow TG magical transformation! XD
Page 1: https://www.patreon.com/posts/shrine-maiden-1-73128404
Page 2:https://www.patreon.com/posts/74038179
Comments
Newton
It says "the gods turly favor you" instead of truly
JesscaTG
yes allways, but this is seprate from the Dollhouse hun :)
Auris A.
This has been bugging me, but do dolls always start as male? Always tg?
Coconutties
Bottom panel has cheast instead of chest.
Coconutties
Top panel has prefect instead of perfect
wolffang 1000000
I see a couple of typos: in the top panel “gift of the kitsun” should be kitsune; “see how the god’s” should be gods since it is referring to a group of gods not something owned by a god same thing in the bottom panel, also the bottom has gods capitalized and the top doesn’t; in the middle panel “there getting bigger” wrong there it should be they’re. Otherwise it looks great
JC
yes, all shall be foxgirls!
JC
lets hope so!
Lux
All shall be fox girls
Enrise89
And so it begins the transformation to something great <3