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Collar6 #1218

🕑 Added 2023-09-08 04:15:25 +0000 UTC
Collar6 #1218
Collar6 #1218
Collar6 #1218

Comments

Lattimer Pines

Agreed. You're working at a pace that's comfortable for you and keeps the readers interested. We see each part being built and it gives us time to wonder "What's next?" This time, you gave us a preview of the end of the comic strip by putting Xor's name in the middle panel, but you saved showing us the way it really played out and how it affected Aventurine for this release.

DarkJade

Well, seems like some chinks are gradually starting to form in Blackstone's total mental control of Aventurine here, due to Ginger's own memories of Xor coming back; this causing her some distress (since that was probably one of the single biggest moments where Ginger's felt the most powerless with regards her being able to successfully help out her family somehow)! Of course, this moment of mental weakness would take place right at the moment when Starlight Butterfly and her own partner were just about to make their own move, these two potentially overpowering Aventurine and the two ponies easily enough; before taking them all for whatever they are planning next (something which might really end up ticking off Blackstone, whenever she actually finds out about what's happened here), with things having become a situation where I'm not sure if things will actually start to improve for our heroes or has this just ended up getting even worse now... Also, I do have to wonder just how things might potentially end up going between Blackstone and her brother here now: are they going to come to blows right now, or will they end up agreeing to setting up some kind of a game, where they can choose their own champions and challenge to face? As for your approach to releasing all the comic pages in smaller pieces and then assembling the panels into the full comics later on, that idea certainly seems like it is working well for you now, so don't stress yourself out here.

Wild Card

Great approach. And I agree. rather than the third panel alone, the entire comic works for the last post of the page.

Silvris

well, that last page is not foreshadowing anything... And yes, the entire thing in the final update does make sense. It is complete, after all.

Stefan J Neylon

I do like having a completed page at the end.


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