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4/29/2017: Falling for her Tits Chapter 25

🕑 Added 2017-04-30 00:58:29 +0000 UTC

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larqven

Amy's pet girlfriend, Diane was hot in the idea of her utter and needy devotion. One wonders what will happen with her, as she might be the most 'ruined' by Amy's power of all? Perhaps one reason for Amy's guilt and willingness to free her slaves and toss Cathy away 'for her own good'? Gina writing self deprecating insults on her body and sending them to Amy was hot! As was her inner frustration and enforced need to stay positive. Cathy's day as a cheerleader acting peppy and twirling in a cheerleader skirt was great fun! My favorite was actually Cathy trying to extricate herself from the locker room, yet her words sounding all simpering and 'I'll do anything if you just ask!'. Probably followed by when she woke up and saw herself as a cheerleader.

larqven

Amy as mistress and the action scenes in the 'Bad Ending' was a lot of fun. Certainly, the intrigue at the beginning with Cathy sneaking close, and the nerd girl Beth getting entranced and used was a lot of fun and a great way to begin the story. So is the idea of the girl who has-or taken-everything vs. plucky and / or jealous girl who tries to be a hero or act as a spoiler.

Rory Hatchel

Favorite scene was Amy hypnotized in the bathroom getting off on the idea of being caught. Seeing Amy love the humiliation and exhibitionist nature was delightful. I know Cathy dabbled in that, but she's quickly accepted it, and as a sub it made sense. Seeing Amy embrace her sub side was always hot.

The scene with their teacher, Sarah, as well as when Amy was made to eat out the entire cheer squad really stood out as some really great MC moments! I think it was the focus on those Amy had brainwashed and the desires she had emplanted in them being used for her punishment and their enjoyment (not that Amy wasn't beginning to enjoy her new sub life) that I found really well done.

larqven

For me, Cathy being back on top doesn't make sense, as we've already been there, and Cathy would not have relinquished control if she weren't already preferring being the sub deep down. For Amy, while she too might have enjoyed being on the receiving end of humiliation, she fought her way out of it, and she's more herself when she takes charge. It was really cool seeing her 'get mad' again, and splinter the door! Lest we forget, Brooke's family has money, hence a marble...bust that Amy used to break into the room. Amy's fear isn't without reason, as we see her re-enslave her friends Gina and Brooke for tempting her. But Amy is impressive when she's assertive, she just needs to have limits to her actions and use of people. There's only so many people one can meaningfully--play with. Amy just needs to exercise some discipline with her pleasure. keep her friends as personal trainers and personal assistants so as she doesn't lose control of herself, and counter her shortcomings of greed, sloth--and occasional ineptness at being the mistress in charge. The image of Gina and Brooke on their knees on the floor, masturbating in unison, and Amy physically breaking down the door--with the marble bust--was really hot. I loved how the story sort of came full circle with a struggle on the bed.

larqven

This ended up being a story more about relationships than MC, but one that still kept me eagerly reading. Your chapters almost always have the end seemingly coming much too soon.

Sammynona

Don't worry, there's about 6 or 7 chapters left, although this is more to include more hypnotic fun with everyone. We've still got prom and Brooke's anime convention that they promised to go to ;)