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Lost Bloodline 5 - Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2025-10-20 08:01:01 +0000 UTC

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M. Tress

Some folks prefer them, some folks don't. I try to balance both halves out. I haven't been doing the 'previously' ones for Lost Bloodline so it's not something I can really start at this point in the series.

Steve Wells

Personally, I would not include recap paragraphs or statements. Trust that your readers can remember things, or have a "Previously...." Here are the paragraphs that don't need to be included, imo. The trio had been posing as traveling merchants, something that was patently ridiculous given that they were coming on foot over the plains in the winter, but Koda had decided to entertain them for the moment to try and learn more. And also because he’d had a feeling that they would have just followed him at a distance if he hadn’t. It had only taken a day in Silverstone before the leader of the trio had approached Kris Dewclaw, the headwoman of the Ivory Spear tribe and leader of Silverstone, with an offer to ally with his people who apparently had moved into the lands south of the mountains and across the plains. Threats had also been made that the elven forces were currently battling a large army of Crooked, and could easily allow the twisted creatures access to the plains and the northern lands where Silverstone lay. Kris had refused, as the elves had been all but demanding Silverstone switch to paying its taxes and allegiance to this unnamed elven faction. An act of treason against the baron who held these lands and had originally allowed the establishment of Silverstone. The elves had been ordered to leave the valley and surroundings of Silverstone, with Kris preparing and sending a report to the baron’s representatives in Amberpost. They’d debated on whether it was a good idea or not to inform the baron of the events, but it was eventually decided that it would be far better to be up front about the attempted subversion than to hide it and potentially draw even more attention.

The Foreign Traveler

YES! I was hoping that one of Koda’s plans would involve reclaiming the Moonlit Realm. Maybe also reclaim the Roaring Lakes even though Orimi is gone if I’m remembering right…


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