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🕑 Added 2023-09-19 01:32:49 +0000 UTCWe're Enhancing Game Text and Welcoming a New Partner! With her consent, we'll briefly showcase her improved work and seek your feedback through a vote.
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Comments
Montravious
Ridiculous.
Yes, thank you for your advice. We will continue to work hard to make it better and better.
Serrated
Honestly since it's been brought up, you guys really need to straighten out your grammar. I realize English isn't your first language, and It doesn't have to be perfect, but what you have a lot of the time just doesn't read right.
No need to apologize at all, you did a fantastic job! We appreciate all the kind efforts that help improve the work.
Sebastian Prall
I like the new phrasing, but it needs a once-over for small details. For example: "a excellent yoga-sculpted shape" should be "an excellent, yoga-sculpted shape" "An" instead of "a", plus two adjectives describing the same noun should be separated by a comma ("excellent" and "yoga-sculpted" both describe "shape"). If I'm being annoying, I apologize. I used to work as an editor, so those kinds of details just scream at me.
