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The Bait and Switch - WIP

🕑 Added 2017-09-26 21:53:10 +0000 UTC

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Whitestripe

Hey there, just finished reading the tale and man was this story a doozee. I've always been a huge fan of your tales. Expecially featuring Renzyle and his family. I loved the otters a ton, Eli and his friends were just so dang adorable with Jake, I just wanted to squee and hug them all. Everything felt so vivid and real, I could see it all perfectly in my head. But I have to say, honestly, what stole the show for me was Renzeyl and his brother. Those two were just amazing with each other. I honestly couldn't stop giggling as they were talking about some of the hijinks that goes on or when Famjin pushed the otters into the Viper pit. All in all. This tale was fantastic and I loved it. The characters and plot felt strong, and everything fet like it belonged. Nothing felt out of place or forced for the sake of doing it, which I really appreciated personally. You did in outstanding job and I cannot wait for your next tale.


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