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Two Hundred Dollars Ch. 10 (v2)

🕑 Added 2018-11-15 00:23:01 +0000 UTC

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Xavier Torch

Thank you!

Mark

Another good chapter. I found a few more typos though: "... their relationship hinged upon her decided when she wanted to be spanked..." - decided should be deciding "... turned on his computer and drew him notes from his assignment..." 1. him should be his 2. I can't decide if this is an error or just using language differently: I would have used for instead of from in the line above, but from isn't clearly wrong either. "As the minutes turned to hours, s strange sense of satisfaction..." - looks like an adjacent key error: "hours, s strange" should be "hours, a strange" "... he ought to be able her from her feet..." - missing words between able and her. Presumably, "able to see her" was intended


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