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I Get Comments
🕑 Added 2019-10-17 23:37:28 +0000 UTCSometimes I get nice comments on Literotica.
Sometimes I get critical comments.
Sometimes I get this.
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Hard to believe that the same person wrote this as the other stories
This one is imaginative, clever, well written and a master-class in dialog. The others, well, least said soonest mended.
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Which is kind of weird, because Talla's Temple takes so much more work than Two Hundred Dollars. A book like that needs a bit of planning, and plotting and so forth. Two Hundred Dollars just needed a vague theme (use "vulva", pay attention to consent, build tension like crazy) and a distant destination (sex).
But, there we are, a "master-class" in dialog from a guy who writes stories not even worth insulting.
