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Bk 2 Ch. 54 To the Victor

🕑 Added 2024-09-05 23:48:30 +0000 UTC

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Nate maresch

That's sound logic. Once you're a leader; which Santi declared himself, unless it's a "let our champions decide" or duel there isn't a situation where my argument makes narrative sense. I did say it was well done and I want a threat in the shadows. Being a competent leader makes the current big baddie a better antagonist. Thanks for responding.

Dominick Ruiz

While it was a duel between the two it's also supposed to show the difference between the two. Santi, who's the leader of a group, fought alone and won the fight. Duncan, also a leader, had his people close by and used that for his advantage in being able to escape. While not true foils the two are opposites and we see it reflected in this fight. (Or at least I tried to do that)

Nate maresch

Might revisit this comment but I want a recurring adversary to save himself, if he's plot necessary and "his work isn't done." Deus ex machina should be reciprocal but man vs man becoming man vs environment at the climax isn't my fave shift. An Apostate get out jail gimmick amulet just like Santo's unfair healing potion would suffice. Two cents anyways. Still well done.

Wilhelm Petersson

God dammit wanted duncan dead


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