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Teaching a Lesson Part 08

🕑 Added 2020-07-23 03:19:11 +0000 UTC

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I'll think about it. But I kind of liked the way that Cody was so arrogant that he thought he'd never lose the Chronivac as well. To where he changed so many people in the school without any ramifications but then he let his defenses down because he was going to do nice for one of the teachers instead of something bad. So idk. Honestly, I do feel like I need a better ending than the one that I have. Mostly because it's so long and having so many random stories that don't really have a structural narrative and are rather just a bunch of random scenarios seems kind of lame. But at the same time, I only expected this to be 4 maybe 5 parts... So, Idk.... 😅😄 I'll give it some thought.

I always think the writer should write what they're into most. Comes across more authentic that way. But... if you're looking for suggestions. I think Cody, put a command in the phone before changing Mr. Duport. Something he can activate at anytime, or something that led Mr. Duport to make the changes that he did.

I mean.... Spoilers and all but I haven't thought of a super good 'twist'. Honestly, I hadn't thought it would go on this long either. Or how much people would like it. But the original ending *Again Spoilers* was that it was just going to be Mr. Duport handing him back the phone and saying, 'don't do anything I wouldn't do.' So he'd grind his teeth wanting to turn everything back but can't. Nor can he change anything to what he wants because he can only change things the way the teacher would have.

There's gotta be a twist where Cody gets the phone back... right?


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