David Willis
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Unused strip for April 11, 2025
🕑 Added 2025-04-11 14:22:12 +0000 UTCHere's a version of the Dorothy Comes To Class Late strip where I tried to... have an off-panel Robin and Jason continue the lecture, such as it is, while Dorothy and Joyce exchange glances? And it didn't work, at all. Dorothy doesn't even get to enter the room!
So I started over, gave Robin some actual presence, got Dorothy actually inside the classroom, ditched Jason entirely, and then focused on Dorothy and Joyce without the off-panel distractions.
seriously why was dorothy just standing in the doorframe, what was that
Comments
Sibre Collard
Still love the "Your new boss" line on the blackboard.
PotentPinion
I see what you're saying with the problems you mention on the original strip, but I think the double meaning of Robin's speech bubble over Joyce in the last panel was very good.
