David Willis
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Pre-art-revision strip for May 2, 2025
🕑 Added 2025-05-02 15:10:24 +0000 UTCNot really an unused/rejected strip. It's all basically the same as published! It's just.... as my buffer gets longer and longer, suddenly now I'm realizing I'm publishing year-old art. Art I drew a long long time ago that SUCKS NOW.
And so sometimes the day before publishing, I'll just redraw a Dorothy here and there, you know, to stave off the demons:
Also, a thing that I notice when I flip through comics in my hard drive's directory, is that, you know, sometimes the sizes of characters on the bed might shift a bit too much, strip to strip, so also I kind of embiggened Joyce and Dorothy a tiny bit to keep their sizes consistent. This also makes the bed a little more cramped, which, you know, is kind of a narrative plus here.
I don't tend to save the early versions of simple art massaging, but I did in this case, so I decided to share.
Comments
Michael Steamweed
Things I would not have noticed until the professional pointed them out to me.
darklion
Dorothy went from mildly concerned to looking like the world is gonna end. I'm assuming that's what you wanted, so count yourself successful.
