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Tunnel Rat Chapter 390

🕑 Added 2025-02-19 22:06:01 +0000 UTC

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JohnHarris

So, the wink link in the chain -> So, the weak link in the chain

Tim Nash

“tipped auger to drill a four-inch that runs six feet deep” should probably be ‘four-inch tunnel that runs …’ or ‘four-inch hole’

Tim Nash

“Sitting inside the tunnel, began constructing the array” Should probably be ‘he began’

Konrad2

Maybe can tame or hire it." -> Maybe we can tame or hire it."

Konrad2

So, the wink link in the chain is -> So, the weak link in the chain is

Konrad2

They're tearing threw the levels of mining -> They're tearing through the levels of mining

Unknown

Thank you for considering it. I truly do love your work.

Jeremy Macdonald

just binged 14 hr days to do all 391 chapters !!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE!!! please sir can i have another :P MORE !!!:) TY

Michael Clark

I'll think on it some.

Unknown

I have been trying to think how to put this for awhile and it is posted on the wrong chapter, but I think you should rewrite the part of the story where Milo meets his family. The way it is written is very unsatisfying for something that is so pivotal. It lacks detail. Now that the characters from the Alphabet are developed more, it would be easier to say how each specific character reacts. What does Onyx do with the cheese dip? Does Bork hesitate before running to Milo? Who holds onto Milo tightest before letting go? Maybe someone dries their eyes on Milos shirt. Also, their early conversation in the next chapter, sans the hugging, could use some more warmth. More emotion in their conversation as it progresses. I don't have any ideas on how to add it, but I think it needs it. I hope this critique helps. MY EDIT: I used the wrong word. It should be *edit it* not "rewrite it."

Felix H.

You gotta love how smart those old engineers are. Recognizing that something that can melt super hard gneiss should not be pissed off, but rather than be worried, they ponder hiring the responsible one. Really love it

Findell

"Maybe can tame or hire it" --- "Maybe we can tame or hire it"

NameGame

LOL that ending. Super funny, great way to wrap it up. Thanks for the chapter. Glad to hear you're feeling a bit better, hopefully one more good night's sleep and you're over it entirely.

Michael Clark

Milo left the motivation in plain sight. :)

Jeremy Young

Let's fight a dragon from below! Let's Go!

Engineer4God

Tank oo fur da chap!

Andrew Denton

"Loser gets to build a bridge" would be very confusing motivation. If I win, I don't get to build a bridge?

Dudedorey

The tunnel digging has been interesting, but I won’t be too sad when it’s all finished haha. Looking forward to see what the engineers think of the Dwarven hold.


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