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Tunnel Rat Chapter 394

🕑 Added 2025-03-07 00:29:10 +0000 UTC

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Tarasandia

So much to love - I especially love this line: "...with high-powered rivet guns, bazookas, grenade launchers, and experimental weapons no one would let them fire back at the outpost."

JohnHarris

TWK, Thank you, well done. Although I cant find 395 yet? I'll look harder?

JohnHarris

long reptillian tail dotted with spiks of shining metal and a nob -> long reptilian tail dotted with spikes of shining metal and a knob?

Peter Jørgensen

Timmy never did Fall down a well I'm almost 100% sure about this. it's been a long time since I've seen Lassie but still

Tim Nash

We did also have some bits with the fighting styles he learned in the Hollow translating over into the real works fighting the cybernetic assassin. I agree parts like that really bring the disparate naratives together

Nicolai Buch-Andersen

Yeah, the real life and virtual reality parts of the story almost feel like two different books - both are really good, but the fun tunnel construction competition feels a bit out of place in the middle of the heavy themes and real life danger Milo and Belinda are dealing with. I really like the small paragraph a while back, were Milo reflected on how his experiences in Shadow port and the Hollow might be relevant for revitalizing the habitat. Wish there were a bit more of this kind of stuff to tie the narratives together.

Tim Nash

Ok, so just some speculation here.. could these corrupt creatures and CHIMERA 7 be related to the enemy that Hectate sent Milo out to find? There is a specific call out about the system be very quite during the chimera fight. And it had some choice words about the corrupt creatures he encountered before. And if something is running around causing corruption in the code - that could translate to corrupt creatures. Last thought... While it's fun to be back in the game this whole session seems to be a lot longer than a 4 hour nap. Weren't we all hyper focused on fixing Belinda? Generally the story jumps back and forth between game and the hab in real time.

Tim Nash

“burned off where their army didn't cover” that should be ‘armor’ not ‘army’

Tim Nash

“Brutus held the Shield for six beats of his heat” last word should probably be ‘heart’

Tim Nash

At the end of the previous chapter you said the chimera had a scorpion tail “emerged, stomping along on mismatched reptillian legs, copper tentacles waving in the air, and a long, shiny scorpion tail arcing over its back” but this chapter has it as a reptilian tail.

Tim Nash

“Copperhead tails flailed in the are with cave bear head attached to the ends” should be ‘flailed in the air’

The El Bandito

As impressive as that acronym was, I’m more impressed that you got a solid acronym out of Milo’s name.

Konrad2

corrpution -> corruption

Konrad2

and terrible devise-> and terrible device

Michael Clark

Yes...Never come up with a name that you want to use, especially when you can make it work in a couple of ways, and then try to find the acronym later. :)

The-Nowhere-Man

I suspect the sheriff in this case is Hekate aka Catherine

Felix H.

Mhmm shoddy mechanics cause one heck of an angry engineer... Now to the question about who built this thing... Oh and isn't milo long overdo for his tier up?

Book-Wyrm

damn those dwarves really had to work to make that acronym fit lol

Ken Horne

Sheriff, Jimmy smelled up the pail!

RedInkQuill

Can’t wait for the next one

Engineer4God

Tank oo fur da chap!

Forestfire

There are enough GW references it could have been a 40K Ork

NameGame

lol loved the ending. Great chapter, thanks!

brennon Petersen

Tftc!

Andrew Denton

"spiks of shining metal and a nob on the end. " Either that's meant to be "knob", or they've found an innovative use for the nobility. Honestly, it could go either way.

Forestfire

I think the lassie quote translats as "Georgie go find Catherine and tell her Milo broke the game again. Bring help"

Cam

Tftc!!!

RedInkQuill

Great. Thanks

Findell

Oh this sounds like one of LAMA's things. Or myabe ah the hidden adversary.


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