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One Piece: As Heavy as a Gale #39
🕑 Added 2025-05-03 10:25:50 +0000 UTCEventually, Florencio snapped out of the haze.
The grief didn’t fade—it never really would—but something darker and sharper cut through it like a razor: rage. Not the poetic kind, either. Not the sort that made a man shout into the rain or punch a wall dramatically.
No, this was deeper. A simmering, surgical kind of fury that clung to his bones and made every breath feel like an insult.
But more than that—more than the fury—there was need. Desperation. He needed to know what happened. Who did it. Why. He couldn’t bury ghosts without names.
So he searched.
He stalked the town’s remnants like a revenant, asking anyone who’d look him in the eye what they’d seen. Most gave the same answer in frightened tones: “The mansion… it just went up. One minute it was there, and the next—it wasn’t.” No witnesses, no explanation. Just fire. Convenient, neat, and utterly hollow.
But then he found someone.
Behind the old chapel, hunched under a torn blanket, was a man barely clinging to life. His skin was a patchwork of burns, blistered and blackened in places that no doctor would call salvageable.
His face was almost gone—no features, just melted flesh—but when he spoke, the voice was there. Soft. Familiar. "Señor Florencio…?"
Florencio froze. He knew that voice. That cadence. That slow, polite formality. And despite the man’s ruined appearance, his build was still tall and wiry—recognizable in its own way.
He’d been a servant at the estate for years. One of the quiet ones. Always there, never quite seen.
The man coughed blood, wiped his mouth with shaking hands, and then spoke the words that changed everything.
A Celestial Dragon had visited the island.
Florencio didn’t react at first.
The man explained—stammered, really—that the Celestial Dragon had seen Alma. Just seen her. That was enough. He took a fancy to her, like she was a painting in a gallery, or a trinket in a market stall.
He brought his escorts to the De La Rosa estate and demanded they hand her over.
They refused.
Of course they did. Aurora would’ve spat in his face. Her father—stubborn, proud, terrifying even in old age—would’ve drawn steel before the man even finished his sentence. And that’s exactly what happened.
The servant’s voice broke as he described it. How Aurora’s father cut off the Celestial Dragon’s finger. A single, beautiful, defiant act. The kind of thing most men would never dare dream of.
But then came the retaliation.
One of the escorts stepped forward. A man in a Marine officer’s coat. Ordinary, at first glance. But then—lava. Not fire. Lava. The man’s entire body turned into molten stone. And that’s when the world ended.
The servant remembered the floor shaking. Walls melting. Screams. He remembered Aurora grabbing Alma, trying to run. He remembered someone shouting her name—Florencio’s name.
And then a support beam fell. It hit him hard, caving in the cellar floor. That’s the only reason he survived. He’d been buried in the ruins, unconscious, while the rest of the estate was turned into slag.
Florencio didn’t speak for a long time. Just listened. Silent. Cold.
Florencio eventually stood up. No dramatic speech. No crying. Just a quiet nod.
He had what he needed.
A name would come later. But there was a face now.
A man in a Marine officer’s coat who turned into lava.
And that would be enough to start.
Florencio would have his revenge. Of that, he was certain. There wasn’t a doubt in his mind, not even a flicker. He had to—because if he didn’t, he’d never rest in peace. Hell, he'd never sit in peace.
That thought alone kept him going some days. But knowing what you must do and knowing whether you’re even able to do it? Those are very different beasts. And right now, the beast gnawing at Florencio was the cruel reality of his condition.
He was dying. Slowly, steadily, and unfairly. Whatever sickness had its claws in him wasn’t letting go. And after that fight with Whitebeard—the kind of glorious, reckless, very stupid clash that burned years off a man’s life—he knew he didn’t have much time left.
Whitebeard had found the duel amusing, even admirable. But all Florencio could think about afterward was the way his lungs burned, the blood in his handkerchief, and how every breath since then felt like it was made of broken glass. At best, he had maybe three more fights like that in him.
Four, if he skipped meals and was okay with dying in the middle of the fourth.
Was that enough to reach a Celestial Dragon, though? One surrounded by admirals, slaves, and ten layers of smug bureaucracy? Not a chance.
So he changed plans. Step one wasn’t revenge—it was survival.
He needed to cure himself, or everything else would be nothing more than a dramatic story told by a dying man with good hair. His life had always belonged to Aurora and Alma, and now that they were gone, that hadn’t changed. He just wasn’t living for them anymore.
He was fighting for them. And that meant staying alive, no matter what.
So Florencio set out again, leaving behind the ashes of his home and his pride. That little sloop of his—a vessel far more romantic in his memory than in actual seaworthiness—was all he had.
He sailed not like a dashing swordsman, but like a ghost trying to dodge the attention of the world. No duels, no grand declarations, no enemies left bleeding on the cobblestone.
He became a rat, really. A dramatic, sneezing rat. Eyes to the ground, always walking near the wall, refusing to meet anyone’s gaze. The kind of guy who looked like he was either lost or allergic to confrontation.
And honestly? He was allergic. To pollen, to loud noises, and very possibly to death.
Along the way, though, he met someone.
A thief. Not a particularly good one, mind you. The man had tried to rob him and ended up apologizing because he’d mistaken Florencio’s ragged clothes and hollow-eyed stare for that of a fellow beggar.
Turned out the thief had a terminal illness too. Something slow, creeping, and cruel. The two got to talking, and somehow—against all odds—they became friends.
Misery loves company, but terminal illness? That stuff throws parties.
They traveled together, swapping stories, stealing from people who kind of deserved it, and dodging fights whenever possible. For once, Florencio allowed himself to not be a walking tragedy.
Eventually, their path led them west, to a quiet, forgotten country few ever visited. And there, in the most unexpected of places, they stumbled upon it: a grove of cherry trees, blooming in full, radiant pink.
It was the kind of sight that stole the breath right out of you, even if your lungs were already doing a terrible job.
And then, miraculously, the thief got better.
Not "oh I feel a bit better" kind of better—cured. His illness just… vanished. The man could breathe, run, even laugh without coughing up bits of regret. He wept, right there under the trees.
Florencio stood nearby, hand on his sword, unsure whether to be jealous, amazed, or just confused.
He wasn’t cured. Not even a little. Not even a dramatic anime-style coughing fit followed by “I feel stronger!” Nothing. But something did change. Something inside.
The trees, the thief’s joy, the sheer absurdity of it all—it didn’t heal his body, but it awakened something in his sword hand. He remembered what it felt like to want to fight again. Not for glory, not even for revenge. Just to move. To live in the moment.
The thief eventually left, claiming he had to return home. “All illnesses can be cured,” he said with a grin that was both hopeful and completely unscientific. “I need to help my people. They deserve a second chance too.”
Florencio let him go, watching as his friend disappeared over the hills. He didn’t follow. He had his own road to walk—long, painful, probably uphill, and most certainly involving more allergies.
But for the first time in a long while, he didn’t feel like a rat.
He felt like a swordsman again. A sick, wheezing swordsman with three fights left in him—but a swordsman nonetheless.
Florencio’s journey didn’t end in that cherry blossom grove. In fact, it barely paused. Years passed—not in the poetic, wistful way stories like to paint them, but in the slow, aching crawl of trial and error, of hope lit and snuffed out like a match in the rain. He chased rumors the way drunks chase dreams, staggering from one corner of the world to the next.
Every so-called expert he met, every island clinic and prestigious medical guild, gave him the same answer: We don’t know what this is. Some dressed it up with fancy words, tried to look thoughtful while staring at charts or poking his ribs, but it always came down to the same bitter pill—no diagnosis, no cure.
But Florencio wasn’t the kind of man to roll over and die politely.
His final hope brought him to the South Blue, to the legendary Torino Island—a place more rumor than map dot. People said the doctors there could cure anything, even death itself. Sounded ridiculous. Perfect. So, he went.
He stayed for a whole year. The Torino doctors, small and pear-shaped as they were, took his case seriously.
They ran bizarre tests, brewed potions, and made him do things that were somewhere between medicine and hazing rituals. During that time, Florencio kept to himself. Mostly. Except for one curious young tribesman who kept watching him train with his sword every morning.
The kid was too polite to ask questions and too obvious to pretend he wasn’t interested. So, on a whim—and maybe just to feel useful—Florencio taught him a few things.
Stances, footwork, proper grip. Nothing special, just the foundation. It passed the time, and it felt... right. Like planting a seed you didn’t expect to grow.
Eventually, the doctors gave their verdict. No miracle. No cure. They apologized, sincerely, with those big round eyes of theirs. But that was it. That was the last hope. Just like that, Florencio’s revenge crumbled again, slipping through his fingers like dry sand.
But he didn’t fall apart. Not yet.
If he couldn’t live long enough to do it himself, then he’d make sure someone else could. He’d train a successor—someone strong enough, angry enough, dedicated enough to carry his will and plunge a blade into the heart of heaven if need be.
And so, not too far from Torino, he sailed to Karate Island—a place teeming with fighters, warriors, and kids who thought punching rocks was a personality trait.
By the time Florencio arrived and built his sala de armas—his personal courtyard dojo, half tradition, half stubborn old man pride—he was already in his forties. Not that anyone could tell.
He looked sixty, easy. Gaunt face, grey in his beard, sunken eyes, and a permanent cough that could startle birds out of trees. His illness had ravaged him. But he still held a sword like it weighed nothing, and his gaze could still pin a man in place like a dagger through silk.
Students came. Lots of them. Martial artists looking to add flair to their style, dreamers chasing glory, swordsmen thinking they were hot stuff. Florencio turned them all away.
Too reckless. Too soft. Too loud. Too normal. None of them had the fire. None of them had the right blend of anger and purpose. He wasn’t looking for a student—he was looking for a blade.
Three more years dragged by. He trained alone. Coughed into the wind. Waited.
And then… he showed up.
Scrawny. Awkward. Clutching a rapier like it might bite him. Trying so hard to look confident it was honestly painful to watch. His stance was wrong. His grip was worse.
And his eyes were... familiar. The boy barely knew the basics, but those were the basics Florencio had taught. On Torino Island. To that curious tribesman.
Florencio felt the hand of fate pressing down on his shoulder that day—or maybe just the stiffness of old age—but either way, something told him this meeting was no coincidence.
Still, he wasn’t about to throw his hopes at the first eager youth to swing a rapier without stabbing himself in the foot. The basics were there, barely, but basics weren’t enough.
No, what Florencio needed was resolve. Grit. A burning core that wouldn't flicker at the first sign of blood.
So, he tested him. A sudden strike with a thin branch, sharp as a razor, slicing across the boy’s palm before he even had time to blink. It wasn’t meant to maim, just to provoke.
Gale flinched—barely—but then froze, staring at his bleeding hand like it had just betrayed him. That pause wasn't from pain; Florencio could see that clearly. No, this was shock. The kind that only comes from realizing something you didn’t think was possible.
Gale looked up, not angry or scared, just... confused.
Florencio didn’t reply. He was thinking the same thing. There had been resistance when his branch hit the boy’s skin—like cutting into tempered steel. That wasn’t normal. Either this kid had eaten a Devil Fruit, or he was some kind of biological anomaly that would make a Torino doctor start hyperventilating.
Whatever the case, Florencio filed it away and said nothing. The boy didn’t try to brag or explain, which was good.
He wasn’t trying to impress.
He was just… being.
That was enough, at least for now.
Florencio kept a close eye on him in the weeks that followed. Gale trained hard, no doubt about that. He was focused, agile, surprisingly adaptable. His instincts were raw but promising.
Florencio had seen hundreds of would-be swordsmen come and go—this one moved like someone who’d been in a fight or two, the kind where winning meant staying alive.
But when it came to purpose, to revenge, to that cold fire Florencio had cultivated for years… Gale was clearly lacking.
It wasn’t that he didn’t care. He just didn’t carry that weight. He didn’t seem interested in anything remotely grand...
Instead of brooding over every slash and strike like a man with a vendetta, Gale treated training like... well, like an adventure.
He joked mid-duel. He laughed when he fell. He sometimes forgot why he was even being scolded and just grinned until Florencio gave up and walked away grumbling.
And he had this frustrating, infuriating, disarming way of making even the most serious moments feel light. As if he didn’t see the point in letting life get too heavy.
It drove Florencio mad. And somehow, it made him laugh too.
The realization crept up on him slowly. Gale wasn’t the vessel of vengeance Florencio had imagined. He wasn’t going to grow up into some grim-eyed warrior who’d climb the Red Line just to spit in the face of a Celestial Dragon.
No. He was something else. Something freer.
And to Florencio’s surprise… that didn’t make him angry. It didn’t disappoint him. If anything, it reminded him of the boy he used to be—before the sickness, before the loss, before the world turned grey.
Back when he still danced with a sword just to see the petals fly. Back when he crossed oceans and fought sea kings not for revenge, but because he wanted to impress a girl’s father and stop that old bastard from showing up in his dreams with a disapproving scowl.
Those years had been good. Real good. And in Gale, with all his chaos and clueless charm, Florencio saw a flicker of that life again.
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Potato
Amazing, florencio kinda describing gale how people describe luffy
