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Outrun - Chapter 148

🕑 Added 2024-09-25 22:04:01 +0000 UTC

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lenkite

Subdermal armor is immediately recognizable and hence completely unsuitable for a sneak operative.

Lost Rain

I mean- uh yeah, all intentional… Look at that character growth, ah ha ha… It’s crazy I fell for the sunk cost fallacy for so long even though I wasn’t even the one spending money. The again, they say time is money. I also didn’t really see the incongruousness until it was pointed out fairly bluntly.

Gardor

I actually liked her giving up on the armor, not being beholden to the sunk cost of decision she made. I think it adds a bit of realism to her character that she didn't make the optimal choice initially, and then switching shit up. But yeah, having the sneaky thief fully decked out in plate mail was incongruous in a way I didn't even notice until now. While reading, I was already planning this comment, wanting to ask "was this always the plan for Shiro, or was this you as an author reconsidering earlier story stuff?", and then the blurb at the end answered my question.

Lost Rain

Thats fair. I've had a hard time scaling money especially as of late. I think I'm still stubbornly clinging to weak MC weak pay, which just isn't true in the grand scheme of things. I recently rewrote the interaction with Athena after I read a comment from Gardor. I might go back and up the bounty a bit. Part of the original reason was that Athena was providing the strike team and weapons, so cutting a chunk of the pay would make sense. That being said, as I mentioned in this chapter, looking back it seems a bit stupid I didn't further wash out the interaction more and leave Shiro passive in the negotiations. Especially when she even negotiates with the eidolons now. I'll go back and rewrite it again sometime soon. As for the slow build, I get what you mean. It's intentional, though I don't want to say more and spoil anything. The next couple arcs will be back to the odd jobs before all that though. I've also been hankering to write one.

Warren Zielke

A big part of my interest early in this story is the random odd jobs, it seems like a lot of focus recently has been some slow build. Also there are some odd decisions from shiro personally. I understand both caronne and Athena being intimidating, but the scaling seems off for both. Robbing a penthouse and scoring 6k risk vs reward seems light. And risking your life running against (unknown at the time) corportions for 7.5 seems odd. Even if you want to play it like shiro very intentionally passive or being walked over by the fixers you , she should have the knowledge (or hesitation) that she's kinda being screwed


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