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Outrun - Chapter 152

🕑 Added 2024-10-02 22:04:01 +0000 UTC

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Gardor

"my fingers traced the long scar down my face. The scar tissue felt particularly rough this time around" -> she's wearing gloves "What do you want to do? Sabotage? Or I can send a strike team." -> I should really reread the job negotiation scene before commenting on this, but it seems weird the Athena, the employer, is asking Shiro, the employee, what the next step is. At least when it's phrased like this, but I'm assuming it's actually more of a "so how much am I gonna have to pay you" sorta situation. I just found it a weird bit of dialogue, with the person who actually has a vested interest in the job taking a back seat to the person they hired to do said job. Surely Athena has a preference for what constitutes a "complete" mission. Glowing red chains marked each of the chains-> prob runes, maybe sigils or characters cuz you use runes in the next sentence


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