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Outrun - Chapter 167

🕑 Added 2024-11-04 23:04:00 +0000 UTC

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lenkite

Just go old-school and hire some calm oxes and a bullock cart to drive your gear everywhere.

Gardor

If we're brainstorming flask level ups, maybe make it a dimensional storage sorta thing. A flask has a limited storage capacity, but her drowning some building in gasoline before committing arson sounds cool. Or, instead of switching and having to wait for it to make a new liquid, it could store several different liquids in it's storage space. The second one is more broken than just being a storage space, imo. If she needs to plan which liquid is slowly filling up the space, it at least requires forethought. Making half of it switch seems like it could have neat implications, if the two liquids react with each other, tho.

Lost Rain

I could see some very niche situations, maybe. Might be cool to give it upgrades though at some point. Maybe one where half of the contents immediately transmute over to the new liquid? Would be a bit more of an active magical item then. Also, I did change experience over to practice. You make a good point.

Gardor

Seems like that could be useful...in some extremely niche situation I'm struggling to come up with. There's a glass full of liquid that's gunno explode soon, and she needs to make it disappear? Either way, it is the other half of the magic. That's why I'm suggesting the word "practice" instead of "experience", because the words are interchangeable for her but "experience" has other connotations for the litrpg-fan readers.

Lost Rain

I don't think I've ever explicitly written what happens, but yeah, it just poofs away. The liquid inside vanishes as soon as its type changes. It means experience in the typical form of the word. She hadn't had too much experience messing with chrome, so it was a good experience for her to solidify what she knows and actually work on it. The whole build thing would probably make Outrun feel like a more typical litRPG, yeah? A lot of her abilities are very broad, or in the case of the Stealth ones have overlapping effects. I'll look at working towards more build-style Perks in the future. And yes, It'll work with Eidetic Schematic. I'll write it in at some point during this arc probably.

Lost Rain

Every time I read one of these comments, I realize just how bad a homophones I truly am. I changed this part in my edit pass three times and still messed it up. Thank you!

Lost Rain

Thank you! It is fixed.

Gardor

After a quick change for it to start making water again,-> Ive wondered this for a while, or maybe just forgot the initial description, but: does she need to empty out the canteen before it fills itself back up, or does it poof away whatever liquid is inside it? Is she leaving a trail of energy drink puddles? Good experience at the least.-> this isn't her referring to litrpg xp because she doesn't get levels until the end of whatever task she's doing, right? Or is she counting her potential chickens before they hatch? Just curious if this is figurative or literal, or literal but currently unresolved. If it's figurative, maybe use a word like "practice" or "training", nothing gets us litrpg nerds going like status minutiae. The jam caused his wrist to be locked up facing down.-> think ya should just say "locked", cuz the up and down send a bit of a mixed message. creating a mental three-dimensional image of the limb. It was almost like a hologram I could perfectly see with my mind's eye. ->soooooo...a blueprint? That she can remember forever with eidetic memory? Please please please give her that bit of accidental synergy. She doesn't really seem to have much in the way of synergistic skills atm, unless I'm forgetting something. Insight works with everything cuz it's so broad, and slow mo gun time is in a similar vein, I guess. Still, I do eventually want her to get a more cohesive "build".

Alexander Belousov

"I did pore in some grease" --> "I did pour in some grease"?

Alexander Belousov

"against the sounding dunes" --> "against the surrounding dunes"?


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