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Outrun - Chapter 170

🕑 Added 2024-11-11 23:04:01 +0000 UTC

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lenkite

She needs to get the hand looked at and disinfected. Her ability doesn't prevent her from infection. She can always keep wearing a bandage even after it is healed.

Gardor

Three cheers for wikipedia and for nitpicky readers! We're the real heroes. But yeah I remember them leaking something clear the few times I've been on the receiving end of something too hot. Shit happens when ya party naked.

Lost Rain

I reworded that part. As for the pus thing, you're right. I thought every blister had pus in it, but actually thinking about it, that isn't quite right. I looked it up and burn blisters have something called serum in them. Its similar to plasma. Depending on the severity of the burn, it forms instantly.

Lost Rain

No, but also yes? Its complicated

Gardor

"The heat though? remained an issue. Since the vehicle was still running, it made the repairs quite a bit more dangerous than I was used to. On top of the heat, just one wrong move and my hand could get caught in one of the many moving parts. Not to mention the skin-tightening heat radiated from the beast of a vehicle." -> think ya might wanna reword this, ya repeat "the heat" a couple times. "Except the sauce was exposed flesh and muscle with a nice layer of pus" -> real question, I see this a lot in RR writing, but, does pus form that fast? I always thought it was a response to infection. A related thing I thought, and obviously have no real clue about, is that heat blisters aren't full of pus.

Dominic French

Dang I was viewing the plant group as another organization bent on taking over, not destroying, are they a apocalypse cult?


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