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Outrun - Chapter 175

🕑 Added 2024-11-22 23:04:01 +0000 UTC

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Gardor

So i was saying, isn't stuff constantly swimming through the aether? That's where sprites live, right? Or do they not exist before being summoned? So she doesn't react to stuff happening in the aether, which should constantly be happening, but insight does respond any time the aether is about to impact the real world? I think the problem is I've visualized the aether as a separate plan of existence, with its own goings on, separated from the world by a veil.

FlyEye

I dont like the 2 paragraph. Together with the first.

Lost Rain

Yeah, stuff is constantly happening. It’s like background radiation though and a Geiger counter. It really only notifies during major happenings, such as a spell going off or something coming out of the Aether. Otherwise, she’s just had a bad feeling in the city since she got there.

Gardor

Isn't stuff always happening in the aether? Like, beyond this spooky haunted ghost town with fucked up magic, isn't the aether another plane of existence metaphysically entwined with the real world, everywhere? Is Insight constantly buzzing? If it's noticing magic stuff happening, shouldn't it be constantly emitting low key warnings cuz of the curse?

Lost Rain

Ah, sorry, I never hit send… Basically, Insight warns of stuff happening in the Aether, so the bird appearing triggered it because it… (Spoiler) came from the Aether. I went back and rewrote that part a bit to make it clearer then just saying an ‘ethereal tingle’.

Vakri

Ah I interpreted that to be while Lia was the target, maybe she also would have gotten caught in it, considering how dangerous the bird seems to be

Gardor

I liked her admitting a lack of proficiency when flying the drone, and having the seasoned mercenaries being up to the task. I also have SO many questions about how insight starts working in the recording room. It tingles without a subsequent attack, and then starts tingling to save Lia? I can understand her spider sense warning her of, I dunno, hostile gazes or something, but it alerting her to an attack on someone else seems to be pushing it, to me.

Lost Rain

Scouted. Thank you! It is fixed.

Gardor

"Everything was going fine as the squad carefully steeped every corner of the place, leaving no corner unchecked" -> scouted? Scoped out? This one was tricky for me. Edit: oh, stepped around?


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