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Outrun - Chapter 177

🕑 Added 2024-11-27 23:04:01 +0000 UTC

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lenkite

Pity she couldn't make friends with the Cat-Rat creature. Looks like it has good [Stealth] skills, esp if it could survive in the [Big Bird]'s territory for so long

lenkite

> I was half expecting Hampton to say something, but the guy passed out once more in the passenger seat almost as soon as we got in the car. This is a skill that Shiro needs to learn ASAP. Its worth buying one just so she can Quick Heal when she needs it.

Lost Rain

Yeah, I'll find an opportunity soon. I read this a bit late though... MC's name is Shiro Tsukuyomi. I might need to clear it up in the previous chapters, but the plan was to use the station's weather sensors and the like to get a leg up on the Urjune Company. Hence why Shiro needed to come along to fix anything broken.

Gardor

Noticed the comparison to Frank, thanks for humoring me. That has only made me more bold tho, so here comes my next request: could you find a way to work her actual name into the story? I know it's tough cuz she deals with everyone using a pseudonym, but I read a lot of shit and I find myself forgetting her actual name. Also, this was the first time I realized their plan was to use the radio tower to transmit the group's communication. I don't think that's supposed to be a reveal, and a couple times I've wondered exactly why this portion of the PMC was fucking around by themselves. I thought they were just grabbing parts to fix the APC itself. Maybe add another line to their marching orders. Again, this is a drunk comment, it's very possible I'm even less cognizant of what's been written than usual. Another easily ignored comment.


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