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Outrun - Chapter 179

🕑 Added 2024-12-02 23:04:01 +0000 UTC

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Lost Rain

The thought process was that Shiro would basically be in charge unofficially for this part anyway since she is the one who knows how to get in. And the thing is that Shiro is in her element while breaking into things, not while being out in the field surrounded by dangers on all sides, so it would make sense to put he ‘in charge’ of something she’d be more comfortable with. Not that it matters too much. She’ll be doing most of the opera house solo.

Gardor

Haha. I feel like I may have had an impact on the dialogue in this chapter... I think my point stands, however, that this is a very important "mission" to put her in charge of. Why not put her in charge of the radio tower mission, which was auxiliary at best, instead of the central goal of the whole trip? Breaking in to the opera house was her one job, fixing things up was more of a side benefit of having a techy around, right? Although making her the fake leader and then putting Hampton back in charge would fuck up the tension and be a weird backslide, hmmm disregard my radio tower idea I think. I'm just trying to say, is the "test Shiro" portion of his instructions as important as the "break into the opera house" part? Surely there's a less crucial part of the mission to test Shiro on, no matter what sort of failsafe Hampton is. This is a minor quibble, I doubt anyone else would look at the character choices and call foul. You're doing a great job and I earnestly love the story.


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