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Outrun - Chapter 200 !!!

🕑 Added 2025-01-22 23:04:01 +0000 UTC

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Lost Rain

It was supposed to be loud since the room had gone quiet. I only really eat tex-mex, so tacos are usually crunchy for me. And if only Taco Bell survived, that would be a terrifying future. Also, these guys aren't analogous to the Valentinos. I will admit, when I first started writing Outrun, I wasn't all that focused on the world-building versus the story since I thought I'd only write for about forty or so chapters. There are obvious parallels like the Tiger Claws and the Jade Fangs. I've been trying to drift away from just copying from CP though, so there are fewer and fewer intentionally analogous things. That being said, we all share the same source material of the real world, so there are going to be similarities. For instance, I made Bukicho Street for the Jade Fangs based on the IRL Kabukicho district in Japan before I even realized that there was a similar district called Kabuchi(or something like that) in Cyberpunk 2077. Or in this case, the Blood Scythes are eating tacos and drinking margaritas.

Lazerus56

weird thing to comment about but 'the loud crunch of the taco filled the room '. So I was sorta getting a Valentino vibe from these guys, and guessing they themselves were Latino . Tho the gang name isn't as obvious as the tiger claws analogue. anyway, only taco bell tacos normally crunch. a street taco is about palm sized and you eat a bunch in one sitting. I mean it could have been tacos durados but that's a less common taco type. it's not a plot hole or anything. just like slightly off. maybe this is the demolition man future and in the collapse only taco bell survived but if so wanted to know if it was intentional.

Lost Rain

Thank you!

Lost Rain

Thank you!

Lost Rain

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Lumex

Thank you for the chapter and the whole series, i cannot express how much joy it brings to read this series

Lost Rain

I changed it. Thank you!

SecondBlahm

Contrats !

Arkus86

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Thefreddygamer

Congrats on the 200 milestone!

Gardor

Congrats! Way to go! Really enjoying book 5! "Everyone turned to leave. I froze for a second, realizing the rest of the Blood Scythes were staring at me" -> think ya should say "everyone else", or maybe "the (other?) crusaders turned to leave", or something to indicate that she was left standing there staring at the gangers as her team pulled a synchronized walk out. Otherwise, she's included in "everyone".


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