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Up - Outrun - Chapter 103

🕑 Added 2024-06-17 22:04:00 +0000 UTC

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Mr. Bigglesworth

*cheer*

Lost Rain

It is an intentional idiocy from a character development perspective. I figure the school arc would be the best place to put this plot point, even if it is a bit annoying. I don’t necessarily enjoy writing intentionally dumb actions, but we’re still in Shiro’s mental growth and first major arc of the story. Don’t worry, this arc is wrapping up. Should hopefully be the last of the intentionally stupid stuff for the rest of the story. This last one was intended as a final wake up call.

Mr. Bigglesworth

She knows the Inquisitor is looking for the Circle, but she still hasn't sent the principal's tape to them. This has gone from amusing to idiotic.

Lost Rain

I was going for an already influenced state so she didn’t looked deeper where she would’ve normally. Probably was a bit much.

SecondBlahm

It's a bit too convenient that she forgets to use mana sight for weeks, even more when investigating a school where people disappeared mysteriously. And it is also frustrating seeing this coming for a few chapter now and having to see her still walking in the trap. Still like the story though ;)


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