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Outrun - Chapter 120

🕑 Added 2024-07-24 22:04:00 +0000 UTC

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Lost Rain

Thank you! I’ll try and crank more out sometime to drop the wait time. Still trying to push for at least twenty ahead.

Lost Rain

Fixed it. Thank you!

SecondBlahm

Chapter's numerotation is wrong. Tyftc !

Joshua

Also, side note? I like the different types of perspectives here. I've kicked a few doors, so I feel for Hope. Hope sees a fellow operator walk up to check if something is dead and manages to catch an ambush and react accordingly. PANIC shoots multiple rounds into both the attacking limb and a tiny target in the blink of an eye….. She is THOROUGHLY impressed. All the while, our MC, under precog and time slow, barely reacts and is embarrassed at her actions not being good enough. I like how you portray the power of the abilities while still showing the MCs inexperience and lack of understanding of how impressive that was. In the same time it took a trained operator to raise the weapon and shoot, our MC already shot 5 rounds into a blazing fast target, swap to burst, and fire again at the head. Your ability to depict scenes is top-notch. Please keep up the excellent writing! I’ve begun to look forward to this as much as I do GitC and Gamma Protocol. I cannot wait for the next chapter. My only complaint? I go through them too quickly, and I selfishly want more!

Joshua

Oh my god hun… you are KILLING me with these cliffs! Tyftc though!

The3picPr0

Nooo! Hope! Thanks for the chapter


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