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Outrun - Chapter 123

🕑 Added 2024-07-31 22:04:01 +0000 UTC

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Lost Rain

I do plan on doing some more perspective work at some point in the future that I’m looking forward to. That last one with the Neo-Joker goon was pretty fun.

Gardor

Yeah the scene I was imagining was an outside POV looking at the MC seamlessly doing two things at once and being wowed by it. This story doesn't really have those POVs, to it's credit. Sometimes they're neat to see how the world views our protagonist, to recontextualize some action that isn't worth commenting on in their own inner monologue, but it's a slippery slope and a fine line. Just to be clear, I am not asking for an outside perspective. Eventually I think it may be necessary as she grows, but it's still early days and her powers dont seem that world breakingly impressive as of yet. Hope may disagree, I guess.

Lost Rain

She does, though I don’t bring it up all that much. You’re right that it is under appreciated, though part of that has to do with the nature of writing. For the most part, writers don’t specify which hand does what, we just state that the action happened.

Gardor

I was thinking about asking for more usage out of the ambidextrous perk, cuz I feel like it's underappreciated in these litrpg settings. It's a little dependent on having the processing power and perception to do two completely separate actions, but I still think perfect, magically enforced ambidexterity is a cool power. Then there was a bit about her searching through her bag while pouring gasoline, and I was pumped. Then I remembered, I read a billion stories, maybe she doesn't even have the ambidextrous perk in this one.


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