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Outrun - Chapter 130

🕑 Added 2024-08-14 22:05:00 +0000 UTC

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Lost Rain

I’d say the first two are cases of bad phrasing I need to go back and change. And the expensive chrome was left because it was busted like the other stuff. Shiro just wants it to look through for anything worth salvaging.

Gardor

Can you say "metallic mutant rat tail whip"?

Gardor

"It didn’t allow me up the subway car and finally through the one that went through the brick."-> dunno what this is about, is this referencing the creature hunting her, or how climbing up the seats allowed her to move through the car? "I caught sight of blood-soaked barbs on its tail, but it was far too late to contest me" -> I think this is awkwardly phrased, maybe "but it was too far away to defend itself", or something I was confused that someone looted the three bodies / pilot room, but we're going with they took all the good stuff and left the broken stuff behind? And the supposedly expensive chrome she picked up wasn't worth looting?

Lost Rain

I got part of that message, the rest didn't quite hit right. I don't want to spoil anything too much, but as for her weapons, most of hers being fairly boring normal ones, there will be some hopefully more interesting ones coming up very soon.

Findell

She definetly needs some type of defensive melee weapon thats atleast 3 times some speed/strength enable creature has charged her like that.

Lost Rain

Yes, first mention of real grandfather on the dad’s side.

Lost Rain

She’s too poor to hire someone to go with her, and everyone else she could rely on is either busy or no longer in the city.

Findell

I still cant figure out why she is doing this solo exactly. What exactly is she hoping to get out of going solo in the tunnels.

Findell

Thats the first mention of a real grandfather right? not the fake one used for the idenity for the school?

Joshua

Thanks for the double!


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