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Outrun - Chapter 132

🕑 Added 2024-08-16 22:04:00 +0000 UTC

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Lost Rain

The bracelet has three charms. Each charm can be used for an effect while the bracelet itself is the part that increases her charisma.

lenkite

I am confused - wasn't there just a ONE time use of an illusion spell supported by the Bracelet ? How did she get 2 illusions ?

Gardor

No rush on the skills, although if system v2 gives her an enormous power up it's gonna have consequences, depending on how your plots goin at that moment. Like, accidentally change the flavor of the whole world kinda consequences. Maybe put the "?" after "kill". If it's at the end of the quest objective, it's less clear what specifically you're trying to say. Could be the wendigo isn't dead, could be they're not sure if it's really a wendigo, maybe even they're questioning why it was the goal at all. At least with "kill(?)" The emphasis is in the right spot. Wow, minutia really gets me goin, huh

Lost Rain

Got it all fixed. The bone thing was just an oversight. For some reason it slipped my mind bones don’t float. I accidentally put in the wrong number when she was first looking over the bracelet. She has one illusion/foxfire left. She does get skills from doing stuff. Grenade tossing is eventually going to go under Throwing Weapons. I was thinking about waiting till the Interface Expansion to start expanding the Skill list, but I might add Throwing Weapons since she’s starting throwing grenades so much next time she levels. Trap making would go under tech, as would most stuff along the lines of creating anything non magical. The shoulder was in part due to remnant damage from the rat monster. Won’t be a long lasting effect, but she hasn’t slept since defeating it. The ? Was indeed an indication of an eidolon quibbling over Shiro actually completing the request. Unfortunately for this particular one, it didn’t specify that she had to kill it by her own hand.

Gardor

"a thin line of darkness kept the space for healing."-> from healing "Illusion from the Fox Charm Bracelet was already a stretched thing to do all that I wanted"-> already stretched thin "Fragments of bone floated up to the surface."-> she refers to the pool below as water, so I'm not sure that any sized bone will float in water. If it's not water, maybe use "liquid" instead. Unless that's the point, spooky water doing spooky things. Thanks for the chapter, twas a great one. Excited for a cool new perk, the passives in this story are neat. Thanks for the status page. How many illusions did the fox charm initially have? She has two left, but I was caught totally by surprise when the second illusion fucked over the wendigo. An illusion over the whole hole, destroyed, and then another illusion wrapped up in that to disguise where the actual pathway was? Well played. She gets skills from doing stuff, right? Like, she doesn't choose them from a list. So, is there a grenade tossing skill? A monster hunting skill? An orienteering skill? Trap making? Or are some of those too similar to her other skills. Oh yeah, what was up with her shoulder being hurt, is that an injury from the rat monster I missed? Her healing perk should take care of any long lasting effects. Also is the question mark in this: "Request - Worthy Opponent - Completed Kill the Wendigo(?)" an indication of the system quibbling with her about "killing" the wendigo? Cuz a rules lawyer could argue that while she "defeated" the wendigo, and her plan led to its death, she wasn't actually the being that killed it. Expected the mercurial spirit gods to give her shit for being sneaky like that.


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