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Restless - Chapter 13

🕑 Added 2025-01-30 23:08:21 +0000 UTC

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Lost Rain

I always appreciate feedback back, thank you!

Joshua

Idk if you still want more feedback but that was exceptionally well done. Perfect little turning point for him to mentally fall back on. Plenty of people to hide behind, and the flight portion of fight/flight taken care of by both the bed and the need to stay by the reality anchor. Brains are funny little things and will hyper focus on aspects/ and forget or straight up make up other parts. Like one boy taking potshots realistically isn’t going to have done anything to stop a beast ravaging a super squad…… but I bet he feels like he made a difference! I like the subtle nuances you add to your scenes. They are one of the reasons you are one of the few authors I sub to, I look forward to the next installment!


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