Leaqio.com
Lost Rain from patreon
Lost Rain patreon

Outrun - Chapter 214

🕑 Added 2025-02-21 23:04:00 +0000 UTC

Comments

Lost Rain

Thank you! It is fixed.

Lost Rain

I actually thought about having her bump something ‘accidentally’ when writing this chapter. Yeah, like you said, it would’ve been quite contrived for why they didn’t shoot her.

Alexander Belousov

TFTC! "his heartbreak coming" --> "his heartbeat coming", presumably.

Gardor

Oh bummer I was expecting her to bump into the transport or the armor for some tech blueprints, but I suppose thatd be a bit too "Main Character convenient". Probably better she's too exhausted to think of it, and also you don't have to contrive a reason the shock troopers wouldn't shoot her. Great chapter, well done depiction of the aftermath of a battle, really makes the victory seem earned. Also liked the refresher on how old she is, it's hard to remember that she's just a youth sometimes, at least when we're not mid school-arc.


More Creators