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Outrun - Chapter 223

🕑 Added 2025-03-14 22:04:01 +0000 UTC

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Lost Rain

Sounds like something I need to retcon...

Arkus86

Well, there goes her idea of getting a fleshy eye replacement in that case.

Findell

Chapter 3 it talks about seeing it only in the cybereye.

Gardor

I don't think that she reads her system prompts through her eye interface, but I also have zero memory of it, since it happened however long ago. Might just be wishful thinking on my part.

Findell

Can she use the system without a cyber eye? I guess more interact then use the quick healing perk clearly kept working without the eye.

Lost Rain

I can only describe a study so many times... Yeah, I definitely was writing that gaze part, and then got completely sidelined and forgot about it since I went to check something. Supposed to say her eye color: blue.

Lost Rain

Thank you! Both of these are fixed. It was supposed to be 'awake'.

Gardor

"It was the stereotypical study that I’d come to expect from places" -> haha, i know what this is trying to say, but at face value this made me chuckle at the vagueness. "It was a room I'd come to expect from buildings." “I’m glad you’re away! You really had me worried~!”-> awake "The lady shot a glare at the Inquisitor as she whined like a kid. Her back to me. Her eyes seemed to have a feverish tinge to them.-> I think this should be "her [gaze swung] back to me", or something, cuz i don't think the shrinemaiden's back is facing her, what with the description of her eyes.

lenkite

> I’m glad you’re away! You really had me worried~!” What ?

lenkite

> that barely fit my waste waste -> waist


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