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Splintered Cells 2 - Finale!
🕑 Added 2020-09-11 13:35:37 +0000 UTCIt's finito!!
I hope you all enjoyed this action flick, I know I love making stuff like this! ๐
I'm keen to hear what you guys think in the comments though now that it's all done and dusted!
I understand it might have landed flat for some people who like more lewd comics than character or action driven ones, or maybe some characters didn't pan out the way you wanted, or maybe it struck a great balance for you!
Maybe tell me your favouorite and least favourite part? I wanna hear what you guys thought of it, and if it's a comic you guys wanna see the sequel of, or if I should just go back to sexy shifter antics only! ๐
Thanks again to Alex Hopper for writing the draft of this one, and SwishStream for the amazing edits! You guys are the BEST to work with ๐๐งก๐
As always between comics, next week will be me prepping for the next comic, making assets and sorting out the script and all that jazz so there won't be a comic drop, but I might send a sneak peek or two for the comic YOU chose 'Shifter Subscription'... which is now called 'Wanderlust' ๐
See you then!
Much love,
Nexy xx
Comments
Nexstat
Yeah, I agree it was too long, I reckon I could cut out 30% of this comic and have it much tighter. It's hard to balance the shifting thing, because I try to keep things in the realm of plausibility and characterisation in comics like this one. If you change the character entirely then you start to lose characterisation and relatability, and if you start doing extreme shifting like extending limbs and becoming liquid and thing like that, it takes it to a whole other level and you lose plausibility when compared to someone simply giving themselves more muscle for example. I know it's a weird line to draw when we are talking about magical shapeshifters, but I prefer the more 'grounded' feel... but then I struggle with trying to keep things *interesting* seeing as their powers are limited... It's something I bump up against often and haven't quite got the answer to yet ๐
MrInternetMan
I did find the action interesting, but I do feel it kind of went on a bit too long. Especially given a fight between shapeshiters, it feels like a missed opportunity to not exploit their powers a bit more. Maybe have both of them shift into new forms to aid them in their fight and give them an advantage.
SwishStream
no YOU da best!! ๐งก
Kghostrider
Loved the conclusion to this one, glad Naomi finally got a leg up as she's been going through it for most of the chapter. Didn't read the first part, but after this I'm invested.
Nexstat
She's been through a lot!
Sarah Gage
Naomi needs some serious love. Just in a couple of days she has been knocked out, tricked, lied to, beaten up and had her history come out as lies. And also betrayed. She needs some hugs stat
Zeno
Hmm. That was an unexpected development.
Bailey Millen
Possession power from potion as well as shifting powers would be ultimate wombo combo and surely win the fight but who knows
Sarah Gage
Astrid needs to learn her place and GO GET HER NAOMI!
Nexstat
BIP, BAM, BOOM!
Nexstat
Haha, she's doing well on her OWN so far! ๐
Sarah Gage
Oh my gosh this was action packed this week! Itโs all go and Iโm loving it
Zeno
Yes, get that necklace. ๐
Jason Breslin
Maybe she doesn't need the necklace. Maybe one of these gadgets also provide shifting tech? But then again, I'm not the one writing this, am I?
Aluminumati
Get the necklace!
TeentRick
Good job nexy! keep up the good work <3
CyberJam Jon
Flip me! Helena is willing to off Naomi just because Astrid took the form of Naomi ๐ฑ At least Lily is sort of steps up as a mother here.
Nexstat
Haha, at last reveiled! ๐
Jason Breslin
So our witchy friend finally has a name, eh?
Nariko
A day starting with My Dee is a great Day. ๐๐ป
Only a single panel shift? You drive a hard bargain :p
Sultry sisters up to no good. Whatโs the worse that could happen?
Nariko
Awweee Nice DeeDee is Nice in Full Glance Thank ya Nexy Bexy ^*^ ๐ฅฐ๐
