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RENDER - What's That Noise
🕑 Added 2024-09-02 04:01:03 +0000 UTCI thought the MANIP of What's That Noise would translate to 3D Rendering easily. When I attempted to render this in Daz, it was just panel 4 without the insert and without the statue of Jessica down the hall. The original transcript didn't seem as interesting.
I turned it into a comic. The comic is better. (or is it? You decide.) Still, it is finished even though I'm thinking it needs more. It doesn't. But, I have this pull to add animations for both petrifications and then have Thenno walk by satisfied with her work. It was just a single panel with a couple hundred words of text. It shouldn't need 20-30 renders. Whoever said a picture is worth a thousand words was off by a lot.
Don't have the assets to give her wet hair or to make the statue have water on it (I did download a Medusa Hair asset. But, I'll save it for later.)
Comic Transcript
Panel 1
Thinking: Sure was nice of Thenno to invite us all up to her family lake house.
It's gorgeous up here.
When she said folk often stare at the views forever, I thought she was exaggerating.
This shower is warm. Wasn't expecting that given how cold the lake was.
Off-panel Scream: AAAAHHH!!
Panel 2
Jessica shouting: RUN!!!!!
Inset thought: NO!!
Panel 3
Thinking: Someone's yelling about someone turning into a statue? What? Haha. Look at Jessica just standing there like a...
Panel 4
(Stoney Silence)
EDIT: From David Fenger's comment, I've put a small addition as a bonus image.
Comments
Magicshoppe
Could probably add that to panel 3 if I had the inserts on the right instead of on the left. Ah, or make it a thought bubble that appears on the right side of panel 3 but the dots trail from the insert in panel 4... Hmm.
David Fenger
The end of the transcript made me chuckle. I do feel this one loses a bit without the 'looking in my...' line, but gains a lot to make up for it.
