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Ted's Dolls Interlude 7: Misty

🕑 Added 2024-12-14 05:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Summer Meeks

50 Shades of Oddly Wholesome

Magicshoppe

I wish I could say the flatness was a conscious decision. Anything else I would say, will probably be addressed in future stories.

David Fenger

Some engaging bits, but it feels oddly flat at times, too. I can see where that works for the story of a doll who's having trouble convincing the world (or at least Ted) that she should be one. Good timing for it too, as it somewhat helps explain Ted cutting off the dolls in the main timeline.


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