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Chapter 862: One Rather Important Thing

🕑 Added 2024-06-04 21:40:26 +0000 UTC

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Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

Tiffany Jewell

Anyone else supremely glad to see Merzhin take something that almost broke him and come out stronger? Kid grew up. I'm so proud!

vytas

Just not clear why Alex not got some earth elementals to make scouting before he went to teleport others... For distraction now he could make some huge meteor boom.. making hole, possible cracking what ravener has sealed, and distracting fae lord

Owen Kaz

I feel like this is a misinterpretation of the true story flow, the battle has never stopped nor lessened in intensity, our character's have simply reached a level of strength that what was once an insurmountable threat, is now a single spell away from dust. This battle hasn't lost it's temp, instead the feeling of intensity and the do-or-die momentum has been lost since we feel no threat from our current foes. The threat no longer feels like a threat, and thus the buildup seems slow and tedious, when instead it remains an example of how far our characters have grown here. Sure thousands die for every minute the Ravener lives, but we don't see them right now, we've simply seen our heroes rally and go to war. Switching back to the King's forces being overwhelmed as Alex's spells wear out and his allies begin to flag would be a good idea for setting the tone. Alex can't head back to reinforce them now. And while less foes come through the gates, those that do are far stronger than those already fallen.

Ted Burgess

The perfect denouement moment feels like it has come and gone. The pacing has gone from action packed, or ‘allegro’ to protracted / andante. It’s an interesting transition for an ending. Not sure I like it.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Steven Lamb

Ooooh it’s getting close

Owen Kaz

I have a feeling Alex is gonna find a way to give her access to the power, and with it she'll have enough strength to return to the mortal plane, while simultaneously taking the throne out of the picture

SilasDrekken

I hope that right when Aenflynn pulls whatever scheme he’s depending on, that the traveler yoinks his shiny chair and his divinity goes poof.

mhaj58

Way to bring it to the fae Merzhin


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